Assignment 2 rework – notes

I have mainly stayed with my tutor’s recommendations. The first book was deconstructed to make the revised one, however videos of both will be available in the assessment post.

I considered my tutor’s comments about how an edit of just the children, or just the women, might read. I decided to present the work as a sequence of paired images of the children. I do think this works better, although I am not sure why. I suppose because maybe a child faking a smile has different connotations to a woman faking a smile, though both are for the benefit of a third party.

I removed the original “outro” about “smile love, it might never happen”. I did consider my tutor’s suggestion about using it as a title, but it had too many characters for the smaller album whereas the larger album had too many pages for the set. I also removed the original “intro” and replaced it with something simpler.

I didn’t follow my tutor’s suggestion of retitling the album “Smile, it might never happen” (formerly on the outro) as Paperchase had stopped selling that size. I also like the “Give us a smile” title because (a) the smile used is portable and passable and (b) phoograph albums are typically shared by hand too.

This left me with eight trimmed passport photos of women with fake smiles, which I had removed from the album. For a while I’ve been playing around with the idea of inserting photos of real people into a dolls house context and it seemed obvious to continue with this. Practical issues appeared such as securing the right size of frame and the right scale of prints for paper and fabrics.

Here’s the first pass:

I posted one of these over on the OCA board and received the interesting comment of “domestic hegemony” which got me thinking.  I went to a local shop that sells dolls house supplies and bought a few things to ty out. I wanted to work at a slightly bigger scale. I’ve been a fan of Lauren Child’s collage work for some time, and wanted to explore layering photos and actual stuff.

Here’s the result so far. It’s a mockup so nothing is trimmed to size or glued. I need more frames that are better sized, I want to spray the wooden frame to work with the metal ones and I need to clean that mirror in the middle. I think if this did go in for assessment I’d have to include the smile prop too. I think it’s at least as promising, if not more, than the reworked album and will be asking my tutor her views tomorrow.

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2 thoughts on “Assignment 2 rework – notes

  1. Stefan J Schaffeld July 11, 2017 / 5:10 pm

    Great step further Kate . Liked to see your progression from the beginning. Quite a step . Reading your post I got hooked by the expression of ‘faked smile’. How could you tell that a smile is not fake? Seems perhaps a very contemporary notion in society today – what is not is easier to say that what is it?

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    • Kate July 11, 2017 / 8:16 pm

      Hi Stefan, thank you for commenting and for your support and interest throughout this course. Yes, my work feels quite different now to when I started.

      The smile thing is interesting, definitely something to explore further. It’s something that here, at least, is frequently requested of women and girls by complete strangers, and I wanted to explore that a little. The smile prop was an easy way to symbolise that. Your comment made me think of “fake news” – who is it who defines fake and authentic?

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